Question

10．近日，山東省"假疫苗"的案件再次牽動(dòng)著全國(guó)億萬(wàn)人的心．假如你是李華，你擬向?qū)W校英文報(bào)刊投稿，倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們從現(xiàn)在做起，做一名有誠(chéng)信的中學(xué)生．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．誠(chéng)信的重要性；
2．結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)勅绾巫鲆幻�誠(chéng)信的中學(xué)生．
注意：
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Recently the illegal vaccine（疫苗） cases in Shandong Province have concerned billions of people in China．                                                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
A liar is always looked down upon①and regarded as②a black sheep③by the people around．
說(shuō)謊的人總是被人瞧不起，被周?chē)�的人視為害群之馬．
be looked down upon：被看不起；be regarded as：被認(rèn)為是；被當(dāng)做是；a black sheep：敗類(lèi)，害群之馬；敗家子；
句型二：
When sitting①an examination，we should finish the papers on our own without reference to others'
參加考試時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該獨(dú)立完成試卷，而不是參考別人的答案．
sitting為現(xiàn)在分詞作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，與其邏輯主語(yǔ)we之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，表示正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作．
on one's own：獨(dú)自地；獨(dú)立地．

解答 Recently the illegal vaccine cases in Shandong Province have concerned billions of people in China．It is obvious that the vaccine dealers'endless pursuit of wealth at the cost of public health and honesty is to blame for it．This reminds me of the proverb：Honesty is the best policy．（結(jié)合實(shí)際問(wèn)題，表明觀點(diǎn)）
Never can we attach enough importance to honesty．If you are honest all the time，you'll be trusted and respected by others．A liar is always looked down upon and regarded as a black sheep by the people around．【高分句型一】Once you lie，people will never believe you even if you speak the truth．（誠(chéng)信的重要性）
It is needless to say that honesty is essentially important to us students．What we do should agree with what we say．When sitting an examination，we should finish the papers on our own without reference to others'．In addition，our homework should be completed independently．（具體談到如何做一名誠(chéng)信的中學(xué)生）Dishonesty may bring benefits in the short run，but honesty will promise a bright future in the long term．（講誠(chéng)信的意義）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文實(shí)際上是對(duì)考生的思路以及文章的寫(xiě)作范圍給出了明確的限定，因此考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮；要根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語(yǔ)和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；注意句子的時(shí)態(tài)，注意詞語(yǔ)的豐富和句型的多樣性．