Question

14．學(xué)校打算在你班推選一名優(yōu)干，候選人是Tom 和Mary，一部分同學(xué)推薦Tom，另部分同學(xué)推薦Mary．假如你是班長(zhǎng)，你會(huì)推薦誰(shuí)，理由是什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息和要求給學(xué)校負(fù)責(zé)任王先生寫一份電子郵件．
1，推薦Tom的理由：學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)優(yōu)秀，經(jīng)常受老師表?yè)P(yáng)．
2，推薦Mary的理由：學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)一般但…
3，你的推薦并舉例說明理由：…
注意：詞數(shù) 120左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇電子郵件，推薦一名優(yōu)干候選人．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．推薦人選；2．說明理由．屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)人稱以第三人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：act as （充當(dāng)，作為…），…together with…（和…），gets on well with （相處融洽），enough to do（足夠做…），explain sth to sb（向…解釋），come up with…（想出），agree with（同意）．

解答 Dear Wang，
We are writing to strongly recommend Mary who is the most suitable choice to act as our outstanding class cadre．The reason is that I，together with my classmates，like her．【高分句型】（推薦人選）
Although her academic record is average．We all like her because she has many personal qualities．She is confident，hard-working and helpful．She often explains things to us．Also，she is so kind that she gets on well with all her classmates．She is never selfish．The most important thing is that she is clever and imaginative．【高分句型】She is creative enough to come up with new ideas．We think she has all the qualities to be a good class cadre．We hope you can agree with us．（說明理由）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．