Question

3．目前，父母對(duì)孩子的生活、學(xué)習(xí)等方面包辦現(xiàn)象非常普遍．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以We Want to Be Independent為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
1．描述這一現(xiàn)象及其弊端；
2．你認(rèn)為父母應(yīng)該…；
3．孩子應(yīng)該…．．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一）They make beds，wash clothes or even make study plans for their kids，resulting in the fact that the kids are not capable of coping with real problems both in life and study．
該句使用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，resulting in這是個(gè)現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，比表示結(jié)果；在fact后面that引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句．
（高分句型二）Meanwhile，enough space should be given to the kids for their further development，in which case，the kids will experience life and learn some practical skills．
該句型should be given是一個(gè)被動(dòng)句型；in which case引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，意思是如果這種情況的話．
重點(diǎn)單詞和短語(yǔ)：result in 導(dǎo)致； be capable of 有能力的；be beneficial to 對(duì)…有好處；
還有很多的連接詞，如：therefore，meanwhile，as for，after all，beneficial to 讓整個(gè)文章非常順暢，過(guò)度很自然．

解答 Nowadays，some parents are too protective and they want to shelter their kids from any trouble．（高分句型一）They make beds，wash clothes or even make study plans for their kids，resulting in the fact that the kids are not capable of coping with real problems both in life and study．Therefore，something must be done about the situation．（列舉父母包辦現(xiàn)象）
   Parents are supposed to trust their children，which is beneficial to their growth．Meanwhile，enough space should be given to the kids for their further development，in which case，（高分句型二）the kids will experience life and learn some practical skills．（父母應(yīng)該做的事情）
   （孩子應(yīng)該做的事情）As for children，it's important for us to be self-confident； after all，we have grown up and we are expected to deal with our personal matters properly．What's more，when in trouble，we might as well face up to the challenges first because in most cases，our ability is established in the process of overcoming difficulties on our own．
    I'm sure that with efforts from both sides，the situation will be improved and we will actually be independent．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．