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第二節(jié) 書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分35分）

假如你是李華，女，17歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給中、英文提示，用英文郵件形式向?qū)W生會(huì)寫申請(qǐng)。

情況簡(jiǎn)介	申請(qǐng)理由
英語(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)異；英語(yǔ)家教經(jīng)驗(yàn)兩年；	愿意幫助兒童；
學(xué)�！坝⒄Z(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部”成員	增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)，了解社會(huì)；
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注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。2.郵件開(kāi)關(guān)和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4.參考詞匯：tutor vi. & n.家教 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dear Student union,

I am Li Hua, a girl of 17. I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and

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I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ yahoo.com.cn. 

                                                                 Yours sincerely,

                                                                     Li Hua

 

Answer 1

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Possible Version:

Dear Student Union,

I am Li Hua, a girl of 17. I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers. Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity.

I have a good command of English. For two years I have been tutoring primary school kids in English. Presently I work as a member of the English Club in our school.

In my opinion, being a volunteer teacher at the SOS village is obviously more than just teaching; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. Besides, voluntary work will build our confidence and good communication skills. By helping those kids, I feel I can make a big difference to their future and make a small contribution to society.

I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.

I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ yahoo.com.cn.

Yours sincerely,

                                                                        Li Hua

 

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