12．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分
    I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station．I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people．Before long，a train inspector comes to check out tickets．A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset．Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，that was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner．The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success．No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before．Yet，they had so quickly offered the strangers their help．If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in．

分析 本文講述了在一列車上，人很多很吵，意為乘客因丟失了車票很難受，于是車?yán)锏某丝投甲园l(fā)地幫他找車票，在乘客的幫助下終于找到了車票．這個(gè)故事告訴我們要向那些需要幫助的人表示關(guān)心，這個(gè)世界將會(huì)變得更加美好．

解答 I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station．I had noticed that the carriage wasnoiseand filled with people．Before long，a train inspector comes to check out tickets．A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset．Then everyone in the carriage began searching∧the ticket，that was eventually found under a seat several rows from its owner．The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success．No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before．Yet，they had so quickly offered the strangers their help．If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in．
詳解：
1．去掉had；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．本文敘述的是過去發(fā)生的一件事情，故用一般過去時(shí)．句意：我注意到車廂里很吵鬧都是人．
2．noise改為noisy；考查形容詞，本句中應(yīng)該使用形容詞noisy和系動(dòng)詞was構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，修飾車?yán)锂?dāng)時(shí)的情況．同時(shí)noisy與后面的形容詞短語filled with…構(gòu)成并列關(guān)系．
3．comes改為came；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)楸疚闹v述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，所以使用一般過去時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)．
4．but改為and；考查連詞，句意：一位乘客找不到自己的票，很難受．上下文之間是順接關(guān)系，所以使用and．
5．searching后面加for；考查固定搭配，根據(jù)句意可知每個(gè)人都幫助他找票．固定搭配search for sth意為"尋找…"．
6．that改為which；考查關(guān)系代詞，這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，先行詞為the ticket，故用關(guān)系代詞在從句中作主語．
7．a(chǎn)改為the；考查定冠詞，定冠詞the特指上文提及的同一事物，本文中特指前面提及的那張票．
8．previoes改為previously；考查副詞，本句中應(yīng)該使用副詞previously作狀語，修飾謂語動(dòng)詞．
9．strangers改為stranger；考查名詞，句意：他們?nèi)绱搜杆俚亟o與陌生人他們的幫助．本句中的陌生人就是指那張票的主人，是一個(gè)單數(shù)形式．
10．on改為in；考查介詞． in need是固定搭配，意為"需要"．句意：如果我們向那些需要幫助的人表示關(guān)心，這個(gè)世界就會(huì)變得更美好．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)首先要通讀短文，把握中心思想，再結(jié)合上下文的語境充分運(yùn)用基礎(chǔ)知識，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)，固定搭配，詞的變化等多方面進(jìn)行分析判斷，找出錯(cuò)誤加以修改

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