Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to a bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked by a passing car,that drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid and I joined in with hesitation.Luckily,she was not bad injured and we send her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society,I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】發(fā)生在過去的事情，所以用一般過去時。

句意：就在那時，一個十歲的女孩被一輛過往的車撞倒了。Knock down是固定用法，意思是撞倒。

這里含有一個非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，指物，所以用which。

句意：一位男子立即沖向這個女孩兒，給她急救。所以him改成her。

句意：我沒有遲疑，也加入了急救。所以with改成without。

用副詞修飾形容詞。

發(fā)生在過去的事情，所以用一般過去時。

Compare與I之間是被動關(guān)系，所以用過去分詞。

aware后面接從句，而aware of后面接成分，所以去掉of。

這里含有一個表語從句，引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作賓語，所以用what。