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3．假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華．請用英語給出版社會的編輯寫封信，表達(dá)你對現(xiàn)在使用的英語材料的看法，內(nèi)容主要包括：
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：
1．話題廣泛；    2圖片豐富；    3有助于提高 學(xué)習(xí)興趣．
建議：適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度．
注意：
詞數(shù)100左右；
可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使用文連貫；
開頭語已您寫好，不講總詞數(shù)．
As a student reader，i am writing to talk about the English books published by your house．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇說明自己觀點(diǎn)的寫作，要點(diǎn)已給出，首先把要點(diǎn)翻譯一下，然后用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把它們組成篇章，也可以適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑右幌聝?nèi)容，多使用自己熟悉的句型，而且句式要有變化，用詞要準(zhǔn)確，一定要注意整篇文章的連貫和語言的準(zhǔn)確，使文章讀起來不顯得單調(diào)．在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯，和合適的連接詞如what's more，however，therefore等．同時(shí)可以穿插使用一些高級的句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，狀語從句等，可以讓文章更上一個檔次．寫完后要反復(fù)仔細(xì)的閱讀，修改一下不足之處．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）
What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）
Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      As a student reader，I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．These books have many advantages．One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）These topics，I think，are very popular with us students．What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）However，some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us．Therefore，I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．