Question

17．青少年研究專(zhuān)家Susan Beacham在自己的英文網(wǎng)站上開(kāi)辟專(zhuān)欄，邀請(qǐng)大家分享心目中的"最
好禮物"．她認(rèn)為，禮物貴在心意，應(yīng)為之付出時(shí)間和精力．
假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)用英文發(fā)帖，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
●贊同Susan的看法
●你收到或送出的最好的物是什么
●該禮物的意義
●期待大家回復(fù)
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于80；
（2）符合語(yǔ)言規(guī)范；
（3）在答題卡上作答；
（4）開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
I am a high school student from China．

Answer 1

分析 本文為應(yīng)用文---寫(xiě)一封跟帖，屬于提綱作文．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)使用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：be for （贊成），lies in （在于），value（珍重），care about（關(guān)心），at a loss（茫然不知所措），recommend you to do（推薦某人做…..）．

解答 I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts．（贊同Susan的看法）The value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them..（該禮物的意義） The best gift I've ever received is a book from my English teacher，Debbie，which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA．【高分句型】The book's name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul：The Real Deal：Friends．I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way．【高分句型】And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at a loss dealing with friends at one time．Reading it，I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study．（你收到或送出的最好的物是什么）
I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply．（期待大家回復(fù)）                                              
 Yours ever，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．