Question

感恩，是我們生活中永恒的話題。學會感恩，我們將會感受到更多快樂。假如你校擬舉行一次有關“感恩”的演講比賽，請你根據以下要點寫一篇英語演講稿。要點如下：

1. 感恩對象（父母、老師、朋友）； 2. 為何感謝他\她； 3. 你想如何感謝他\她

【注意】：（1）只能選擇一個感恩對象；

（2）可對所有要點作適當發(fā)揮；

（3）演講稿中不得提及所在的學校、本人姓名和感恩對象的姓名；

（4）詞數(shù)100-120左右，開頭和結尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honour to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, .”

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Thank you for listening.

 

Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honour to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum.”

My life has been blessed with a mother who offers me her unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration. She often keeps me company, cooks tasty dinners for me and makes my room clean. Above all, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I cheer up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother.

Actually, all of us have someone who cares about us so much. So do not forget to show our love in return. For me, either a small talk with Mum or a cup of tea for her will make her happy.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據所給要點寫一篇關于“感恩”的演講稿。寫作要點包括：說明要感恩的對象；感謝他的原因；打算怎樣感謝他/她。注意只能選擇一個對象，可以進行適當?shù)耐卣�；不得提到學校、自己和感恩對象的姓名；詞數(shù)在100-120之間，開頭和結尾不計入總詞數(shù)；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文使用了固定句型It’s a great honour to have the opportunity to be with you today.；定語從句who offers me her unconditional love，who cares about us so much；讓步狀語從句whenever I get upset；時間狀語從句until I cheer up等語法知識，使作文的寫作水平得到提供；

范文使用了較多的高級詞匯：ordinary，highly，appreciate，consideration，caring等，使作文的檔次得到了提升，表達更生動；

范文使用了較多的短語和固定搭配：keeps me company；Above all；listens to；in return；either ...or等，充實了作文的內容；

范文還注意使用Above all, Actually, So, For me等銜接句子和段落，使作文顯得連貫、緊湊。

考點：材料類作文