Question

人人都在渴望幸福，人人都在感受幸福。請用英語寫一篇120詞的短文，描述你體驗幸福的一次經(jīng)歷，并談談你對幸福的理解。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)： 120左右 2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

I still remember

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I still remember the night when it was a cold , late afternoon and it was showering. Without an umbrella to shelter me from the heavy rain, I had to stand still and wait for my father. After seemingly long hours’ waiting, my father finally arrived. I was about to rush home when I found that my English teacher, Miss Wang was also waiting for the rain to stop. Without any hesitation, I went to her and gave my umbrella to her. Surprised but happy, she accepted it. Seeing Miss Wang walking in the rain with my umbrella, I smiled and a sense of happiness sprung up in my heart.

As a famous saying goes, happiness is only real when shared. As long as we are willing to share, we’ll find happiness everywhere.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求圍繞“幸�！边@個話題寫一篇短文。文章可分文兩部分：一次自己的相關經(jīng)歷；自己的感想。注意故事的完整和生動，時態(tài)為一般過去時；第二部分感想不用過多描述，總結(jié)一下即可。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如was about to … when …，without any hesitation，a sense of happiness，spring up，As a famous saying goes，As long as；Surprised but happy, she accepted it.這句話運用了形容詞作狀語；Seeing Miss Wang walking in the rain with my umbrella, I smiled and a sense of happiness sprung up in my heart.這句話運用非謂語動詞。并注意了句子的銜接如：when，as long as 等等。

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