Question

國(guó)際文化交流中心將于今年暑假在英國(guó)倫敦舉辦一個(gè)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，要求報(bào)名者提交一份個(gè)人英文簡(jiǎn)歷。假設(shè)你叫麗華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一份個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷。
姓名：李華     性別：男    年齡： 18  學(xué)校：泉州陽(yáng)光中學(xué)
性格：樂(lè)觀開朗，善于與人交際，樂(lè)于助人
愛好與特長(zhǎng)：音樂(lè)、攝影、上網(wǎng)、學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言
入營(yíng)目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解外國(guó)文化
注意：1.文章應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使上下文連貫
2.詞數(shù)120左右  3.參考詞匯：泉州陽(yáng)光中學(xué) Quanzhou Sunny High School
I’mLiHua,_________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

I’m LiHua, a boy of 18, presently attending Quanzhou Sunny High School in Fujian, China. I’m always cheerful and easygoing. In fact, I’m communicative and enjoy talking with different people. Besides, I’m willing to do as much as I can to help those who need me. In my spare time, I’d like to listen to music, especially light music and English songs. And I’m interested in photography. Sometimes I will surf the internet, which I think is a good way to relax, as long as you’re not addicted to it. In addition, I also like to learn different languages. I’d like to join this English camp since I think it’s a good opportunity for me to make new friends with young people from all over the world. I believe I can learn a lot about foreign cultures.

試題分析：這是一篇要求寫簡(jiǎn)歷的作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更出眾。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于說(shuō)明信息類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。