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第Ⅱ卷（共40分）
第三部分：寫(xiě)作
第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤.對(duì)標(biāo)題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。
注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made great
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
thanks to our parents.

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When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
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practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
as
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
things              practising
me, but was ∧strict whit me than before. With her help, I went∧ the hardest time and made great
more或stricter    his        underwent experienced或through
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
sincerely
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
broadens
thanks to our parents.

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