Question

13．假如你是李華，在蘭州學(xué)習(xí)的英國朋友Tony給你發(fā)郵件說周末要來天水找你玩．請你根據(jù)要點提示給Tony寫一封郵件向他介紹這兩天的安排．
1．周五晚上在天水火車站接Tony，住預(yù)定酒店；
2．周六參觀天水名勝；
3．周日在家的活動；
4．冬季寒冷，請多備衣物．
注意：1．適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
    2．詞數(shù)100 字左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)．
Dear Tony，
I am glad to receive your letter and know that you will come to Tianshui this weekend．
                                                                  
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給英國朋友Tony寫一封電子郵件．向他介紹周末兩天的安排．
寫作時人稱以第一和第二人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點：1．周五晚上在天水火車站接Tony，住預(yù)定酒店； 2．周六參觀天水名勝；3．周日在家的活動；4．冬季寒冷，請多備衣物．
重要短語：receive one's letter （很高興做某事），the arrangements for sth（某事的安排），head to…（去往…），reserve sth（預(yù)定某物），more than（多于），offers sth forsb（為某人提供某物），such as（例如），and so on（等等），be sure to （確信做某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．We will meet at Tianshui Railway Station this Friday evening and then head to the hotel where I reserved a room for you．
此處為 關(guān)系副詞"where"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"the hotel"，從句中不缺少主、賓、表等成分．
【高分句型二】
2．As a tourist city with more than 8，000years of history，Tianshui offers so many sights for you to choose from，such as Maijishan Grottoes and Nanguo temple and so on．
①此處為 介詞as"引導(dǎo)的短語作狀語，主句為"Tianshui offers so many sights for you to choose from"．
   ②此處為動詞不定式短語"to choose from"作名詞"sights"的后置定語．
【高分句型三】
3．On Sunday you will meet my family and you can learn to make dumplings if you like．
此處為 連詞"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句為"On Sunday you will meet my family and you can learn to make dumplings"．

解答 Dear Tony，
 I am glad to receive your letter and know that you will come to Tianshui this weekend．
     Here are the arrangements for your two-day visit．
     We will meet at Tianshui Railway Station this Friday evening and then head to the hotel where I reserved a room for you．【高分句型一】（周五晚上在天水火車站接Tony，住預(yù)定酒店）After a good night's sleep，we are to visit one of the attractions in Tianshui．As a tourist city with more than 8，000years of history，Tianshui offers so many sights for you to choose from，such as Maijishan Grottoes and Nanguo temple and so on．【高分句型二】（周六參觀天水名勝）
     On Sunday you will meet my family and you can learn to make dumplings if you like．【高分句型三】（周日在家的活動）Be sure to bring some extra clothes to keep yourself warm since it's colder here．（冬季寒冷，請多備衣物）   
Yours，
 LiHua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．