Question

7．中國(guó)人不善于向家人表達(dá)"愛(ài)"，但你認(rèn)為告訴家人你愛(ài)他們很重要．請(qǐng)以"Ways to express love to my family"為題，寫(xiě)出如何向家人表達(dá)"愛(ài)"．
提示：1．如果父母生日，當(dāng)面向他們說(shuō)"我愛(ài)你們"‘
 2．經(jīng)常幫助家人做家務(wù)；
3．經(jīng)常擁抱父母；
4．你自己的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Ways to express love to my family．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇說(shuō)明文．文章給出了簡(jiǎn)單的漢語(yǔ)提示，以"Ways to express love to my family"為題，寫(xiě)出如何向家人表達(dá)"愛(ài)"．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1）如果父母生日，當(dāng)面向他們說(shuō)"我愛(ài)你們"；2）經(jīng)常幫助家人做家務(wù)；3）經(jīng)常擁抱父母；4）你自己的看法．寫(xiě)作時(shí)以第一人稱(chēng)為主；時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：various（各種各樣的）；express（表達(dá)）；housework（家務(wù)勞動(dòng)）；especially（尤其）；give sb a hug（擁抱某人）；do good to （對(duì)…有益）
高分句型：1．I am sure①if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do，②especially when they are tired after work，my parents must feel my love to them．
                  ①if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句；②especially when they are tired after work在句中是插入語(yǔ)．
                 2．①Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved and I think I will do ②so ③on some special days．
                   ①動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)Getting small but meaning gifts 在句中作主語(yǔ)；②so在這里作動(dòng)詞do的賓語(yǔ)；③on some special days意為"在一些特殊的日子"．

解答 There are various ways to express love．I think saying"I Love you"on my father's or mother's birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them（高分句型一）．I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do，especially when they are tired after work，my parents must feel my love to them．
Besides，I will often give my parents a hug because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other，which does good to their health．
Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved and I think I will do so on some special days（高分句型二）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)的提煉要全，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式．適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以提高文章的檔次；恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢．