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　　你校為推進(jìn)素質(zhì)教育，進(jìn)行了教學(xué)“減負(fù)”活動(dòng)．假如你是學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的學(xué)習(xí)部長(zhǎng)，對(duì)“減負(fù)”前后的情況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，調(diào)查情況如下圖，請(qǐng)根據(jù)此圖寫成一篇文章發(fā)表在校報(bào)上．

　　注意：①短文必須包括圖表內(nèi)容．

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　　　　　③詞數(shù)為120左右．

　　　　　④文章的第一段已經(jīng)給出．

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One possible version 　　Recently I've made a survey about the “Reducing Burden” activity being carried in our school. 　　We middle school students used to be heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. We spent more than 6 hours in the classroom. At home, we still had to spend over 3 hours on our homework. So we had less than 7 hours to sleep. Besides, we had only about three hours' free time. As a result, our health was badly damaged. 　　Now things are getting better thanks to the activity. We can only spent about five hours in the classroom and hours for homework are shortened to about two hours so that we have two more hours to sleep and also two more hours for free time. 　　So I think this activity benefits not only our health but also our study. 　　寫作步驟 　　(1)材料分析 　　文體：說明文 　　時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 　　人稱：第一人稱復(fù)數(shù) 　　(2)分析要點(diǎn) 　�、儆嘘P(guān)何事的調(diào)查 　�、凇皽p負(fù)”前后各種時(shí)間的變化 　�、圻m當(dāng)評(píng)議 　　(3)提綱要領(lǐng) 　　Recently, I've made a survey of… 　　We used to spend... in, we had only…h(huán)ours to do…, 　　As a result, …/ Therefore, … 　　Now, things have changed…because of…, 　　The hours spent in... has been shortened / reduced to…, 　　We now can have…h(huán)ours to… 　　It does good to…, It helps to improve….It benefits…