Question

13．我校路口是個(gè)交通極其復(fù)雜的地方，每天上下學(xué)非常擁堵．本周為交通安全周，作為學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請(qǐng)你以"Road Safety"為題，寫一篇國(guó)旗下的演講稿，呼吁學(xué)生遵守交通規(guī)則，重視交通安全．（字?jǐn)?shù)：120-150）
提示：（1）交通安全現(xiàn)狀及重要性   （2）列舉相關(guān)交通規(guī)則
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Answer 1

分析 本篇要求寫一份交通安全的演講稿．寫作時(shí)注意把提示內(nèi)容寫到位，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，再加以豐富．運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一、第二人稱．要注意寫作過(guò)程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語(yǔ)：
 traffic rules，交通規(guī)則；fall down，滑倒
高分句子：
1．When you ride a bike，keep to the right side of the road．本句前半句為when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，豐富了句子結(jié)構(gòu)．
2．Always obey these rules，you'll find it much safer to walk or ride on the road．本句為祈使句，后半句包含了省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Every year a lot of people are killed or injured in road accidents．The road outside our school is crowded．（提出現(xiàn)象）How can we make the roads safer？
       As a student，we should remember the following traffic rules．
      When you ride a bike，keep to the right side of the road（高分句型）．Don't cross the road or turn left at a red traffic light．Give a hand signal if you want to turn or stop．Before crossing the road，stop and look both ways，right and left．If the road is clear，it is safe to cross．The correct way to cross is to walk quickly，but not to run．If you run across the road，you may fall down（列舉交通規(guī)則）．
      Always obey these rules，you'll find it much safer to walk or ride on the road（高分句型）．Let's build a safe school together（提出呼吁）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類作文要求將給出的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象．仔細(xì)而認(rèn)真地研究提示是寫好提綱作文的關(guān)鍵．只有理解了提示的含義，才有可能抓住要點(diǎn)，明確主題，有效地組織與主題有關(guān)的素材．