Question

20．In your spoken English class，your teahcer shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文，讓我們就圖片內(nèi)容寫一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第三人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般將來時，內(nèi)容要點包括：描敘圖片內(nèi)容，圖片揭示的道理．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為描敘圖片內(nèi)容．第二部分為圖片揭示的道理．第三部分為作者的觀點．
重點短語與句型：
convey the message 傳達(dá)信息
dream of 夢想
 involve oneself  in參與，卷入
 attach importance to 認(rèn)為重要
高分句型一：I think the picture conveys the message that working together can bring people happiness．此句用了that引導(dǎo)同為語從句，說明the message的內(nèi)容
高分句型二：However，it is impossible to enjoy life by oneself like the lonely stick in the picture．此句it做形式主語，真正主語是不定式．

解答 From the picture we can see that a bunch of sticks stay together and look happy，while one stick is alone and looks upset．（描敘圖片內(nèi)容）
    I think the picture conveys the message that working together can bring people happiness．（高分句型一） Everyone dreams of living a happy life forever．However，it is impossible to enjoy life by oneself like the lonely stick in the picture．（高分句型二）If he or she works together with his or her teammates or peers，he or she will certainly be impressed and cheer up．（圖片揭示的道理）
    In my opinion，we have to attach importance to teamwork and try to involve ourselves in the activities as much as possible．（作者的觀點）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．