Question

假設(shè)你是李明，你們的外教Jerry布置了一個(gè)話題為“Pets in Our life”的家庭作業(yè)，要求寫一篇120詞左右的英語文章與老師及同學(xué)們交流。請(qǐng)參考以下要點(diǎn)提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
1．養(yǎng)寵物的現(xiàn)象；
2．養(yǎng)寵物的優(yōu)、缺點(diǎn)；
3．其它……
注意：1．可以適當(dāng)展開聯(lián)想；
2．詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

Today our foreign teacher Jerry asked us to write a short passage about “Pets in Our Life”. I think everyone has a deep and profound feeling about pets in our life. In addition, I think different people hold different opinions. I want to share my views with you.
We all can notice that more and more people, including many young people, love raising and have begun raising pets. To tell the truth, I think pets are very lovely. And staying with them brings us happiness and comfort, especially for the old. So I think in many aspects , raising pets has many advantages on the whole.
Meanwhile, some people point out some disadvantages of pets. I also agree with them because I also often realize some problems that raising pets causes. For example, too many pets in the public places may pollute the environment and make the public places very dirty.
So I think, every coin has two sides, which we can’t forget. And we should seek reasonable solutions to this phenomenon.

試題分析：本文的話題是“Pets in Our life”，要求描述出寵物的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于可以培養(yǎng)人的愛心，陪伴老人，減少他們的孤獨(dú)感等；缺點(diǎn)太多的寵物可能污染環(huán)境。在于要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。