Question

20．假設(shè)你是王林，寒假期間你要到倫敦旅游，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給你的英國(guó)好友Alex寫一封信，請(qǐng)他推薦一個(gè)旅館，要點(diǎn)如下：
1 介紹你倫敦之行的目的；
2 停留時(shí)間：5個(gè)晚上，從2月8日到12日；
3 房間要求：預(yù)定一個(gè)房間，旅館要靠近公共汽車站；有獨(dú)立浴室；可以上網(wǎng)；
注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Alex，
How is everything going recently？I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）When I am staying there，I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights，from Feb 8 to Feb 12．I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently．In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）
I would appreciate it if you could help me．I am looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely；
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏．在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)時(shí)，要注意條理清楚，層次分明．在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次．同時(shí)在列舉要求的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢．本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)詞匯：recommend sth to sb給某人推薦…，keep in touch with聯(lián)系，gain access to the internet上網(wǎng)．運(yùn)用了固定句型：I would appreciate it if…如果…我將感激不盡；I am looking forward to your early reply．期待您早日回復(fù)．范文中的句式多變，運(yùn)用了不同的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)；so that I can take a bus conveniently用了so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句；I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station這句話在賓語(yǔ)從句里又套用了定語(yǔ)從句．范文中還用了連接副詞in addition"另外；并且"，使文章更加通順．
I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）
In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Alex，
      How is everything going recently？I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me．（高分句型一）
      To experienc e different cultures and broaden my horizons，I will visit London during the winter holiday．（高分句型二）When I am staying there，I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights，from Feb 8 to Feb 12．I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently．In addition，to keep in touch with my family and friends，I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room．（高分句型三）
      I would appreciate it if you could help me．I am looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Wang Lin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．