Question

【題目】假定你是一名高中畢業(yè)生王志，你校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“What to learn in senior high school?”的英語沙龍活動，特邀請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱捏w會。請根據(jù)以下提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿。

1.學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)：方法，習(xí)慣等；

2.學(xué)會做人：真誠，友善；

3.學(xué)會……

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不須抄在答題卡上，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

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Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

【答案】Good afternoon, everyone! I feel honored to stand here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. First, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

Thanks for your listening!

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿，是提綱式作文。要求根據(jù)以下提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿。1.學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)：方法，習(xí)慣等；2.學(xué)會做人：真誠，友善；3.學(xué)會……。。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇發(fā)言稿，格式正確，要點齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，布局合理，同時句中使用高級句子。Developing a good habit is also of importance.動名詞短語做主語；It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.it是形式主語，that從句是真正的主語，句中并使用what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.強調(diào)句型的運用堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，F(xiàn)irst, Personally, In addition, Finally, No pains no gains.的運用為文章增色添彩。