Question

16．假如你是李華，你班的留學(xué)生Charles即將結(jié)束三周的假期從美國返回．你想委托他為你代購一個剃須刀，作為生日禮物送給爸爸．請按照以下要求給他寫一封電子郵件：
1．品牌：Gillette：
2．價格：30美元左右．
參考詞匯：剃須刀shaver
注意：
 1．詞數(shù)100左右：
    2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫：
    3．開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Charles，
I haven't seen you for over three weeks．How have you been doing these days？I miss you so much!But it won't be long before we meet again，isn't it？
Charles，could you do me a favor，please？My father's birthday is coming，and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift．Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars．It is a very famous brand around the world．You can bring it back when you come back，and I will pay you back for that．Thank you very much．
Looking forward to your coming soon． 
    Yours，
    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點寫一封電子郵件，委托即將結(jié)束三周的假期從美國返回的留學(xué)生Charles代購一個剃須刀，作為生日禮物送給爸爸．寫作要點：1．品牌：Gillette：2．價格：30美元左右．
屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．重要短語：miss sb（想念某人…），do sb a favor（幫某人一個忙…），buy sb sth （買給某人某物），around the world （全世界），bring sth back （帶回某物），pay sb for sth…（因…付錢給某人）．

解答 Dear Charles，
 I haven't seen you for over three weeks．How have you been doing these days？I miss you so much!But it won't be long before we meet again，isn't it？【高分句型】
 Charles，could you do me a favor，please？My father's birthday is coming，and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift．Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars．（品牌及價格）It is a very famous brand around the world．You can bring it back when you come back，and I will pay you back for that．Thank you very much．
 Looking forward to your coming soon．
 Yours，
 Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．