Question

16．假設(shè)你是李華．你的加拿大筆友卡爾想了解中國(guó)流行的廣場(chǎng)舞（square dance）的相關(guān)情況．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封回信，要點(diǎn)包括：
1．跳廣場(chǎng)舞的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員等；
2．廣場(chǎng)舞流行的原因；
3．廣場(chǎng)舞引起的爭(zhēng)議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100字左右；
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Carl，
I'm delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you're curious about…
Square dance becomes more popular than anytime before．However，it's a little different from the dance you are familiar with．In the morning or after dinner，people，especially elderly women，will gather in squares to dance to popular music．More and more young people are also joining in now．
There are many reasons behind its popularity．First of all，China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades，and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves．Besides，doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit．
However，because dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places，they annoy many people．Maybe square dancers need to make some changes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于廣場(chǎng)舞話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一跳廣場(chǎng)舞的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員等；二廣場(chǎng)舞流行的原因；三廣場(chǎng)舞引起的爭(zhēng)議．
高分句型：
1．However，it's a little different from the dance you are familiar with．句子里you are familiar with是 先行詞the dance的定語(yǔ)從句，省略了關(guān)系詞that/which．．
可是，它和你熟悉的舞蹈不太一樣．
2．Besides，doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit．句子里動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)doing the square dance 做主語(yǔ)；get fit表示"保持健康"．
此外，跳廣場(chǎng)舞是保持健康的好方法．

解答 Dear Carl，
   I'm delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you're curious about．Square dance becomes more popular than anytime before．However，it's a little different from the dance you are familiar with．【高分句型一】In the morning or after dinner，people，especially elderly women，will gather in squares to dance to popular music．More and more young people are also joining in now．（跳廣場(chǎng)舞的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員等）
   There are many reasons behind its popularity．First of all，China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades，and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves．Besides，doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit．【高分句型二】（廣場(chǎng)舞流行的原因）
   However，because dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places，they annoy many people．Maybe square dancers need to make some changes．（廣場(chǎng)舞引起的爭(zhēng)議）
                                                         Yours，
                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
不同于語(yǔ)文作文，英語(yǔ)作文一定要打草稿，一是為了改掉錯(cuò)誤，添加亮點(diǎn)句子和短語(yǔ)；二是為了卷面整潔干凈．這就要求給作文留25分鐘左右的時(shí)間，相對(duì)于它的分?jǐn)?shù)，這些時(shí)間是值得的．