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6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Today I visited the Smiths--my first time visit to a American family．They live in a small town．It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home．The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home．They offered me coffee and another drinks．We have a good time talking and laughing together．They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question．In fact，they are planning to visit China in next year．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了作者第一次拜訪一個(gè)美國(guó)家庭--Smiths一家的事情，Smiths夫婦熱情招待作者，詢問作者一些關(guān)于重大情況，并表示計(jì)劃明年來中國(guó)旅行．

解答 Today I visited the Smiths--my first time visit to a American family．They live in a small town．It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home．The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home．They offered me coffee and another drinks．We have a good time talking and laughing together．They∧eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question．In fact，they are planning to visit Chinain next year．
詳解：
1．去掉time；考查英漢語(yǔ)不同的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，"第一次訪問"英用語(yǔ)說my first visit便可．
2．a(chǎn)改為an；考查冠詞用法，不定冠詞a與輔音開頭的詞連用，后面若是元音開頭的單詞，就要用an，故把a(bǔ)改成an．
3．for改為of；考查固定搭配，be kind of sb to do sth意為"對(duì)某人來說能做某事太好了"．
4．drove改為drive；考查并列成分，連接詞and連接的是兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)作：meet與drive．
5．his改為their；考查代詞的數(shù)．The Smiths用的復(fù)數(shù)，指一家人或夫婦倆，故后面相應(yīng)的代詞要用復(fù)數(shù)their．
6．a(chǎn)nother改為other；考查形近詞辨析，another泛指"三個(gè)以上中的任意一個(gè)"，other表示"另外的，其他的"，通常與名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式連用，由此可知此處要用other．
7．have改為had； 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的，整篇文章記敘過去發(fā)生的事，用的過去時(shí)，故此處也用過去式had．
8．eager前面加were；考查固定短語(yǔ)，be eager to do意為"渴望做某事"，eager是形容詞，不能單獨(dú)作謂語(yǔ)，
9．question改為questions； 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，lots of 后面跟可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式．
10．去掉in 介詞的使用不當(dāng)．next last，this，that等與表示時(shí)間的名詞連用時(shí)，前面不再加介詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)首先快速閱讀短文，了解短文基本大意，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)，再運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法，詞匯，習(xí)慣性短語(yǔ)等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)一步分析各個(gè)句子，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．