【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的同下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It seems that if the result is bad, which people work for will be meaningless. Personally speak, the process of fighting for the goal is less important than the result. When we fight for our goals, we will be devoted what we are doing and try to improve us. If we fail in the end, when we look back on the beginning, we will find that we are no longer the childish one. We have grown up. What's the more, in the process of fighting, we got close to success, as the saying goes that failure are the mother of success. So don't treat the result so serious; just enjoy the process.

【答案】

【解析】本文為議論文。作者簡(jiǎn)要論述了過程比結(jié)果更重要的原因。

第一處：which改為what；考查名詞性從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處為主語從句，連詞在從句中作work for的賓語，which“哪個(gè)”與句意不符，應(yīng)使用代詞what。故which改為what。

第二處：speak改為speaking；考查固定搭配。固定搭配：personally speaking“個(gè)人而言”。故speak改為speaking。

第三處：less改為more；考查比較級(jí)。根據(jù)下文的描述可知，此處指“為目標(biāo)奮斗的過程比結(jié)果更重要”。故less改為more。

第四處：devoted后加to；考查詞組搭配。詞組搭配：be devoted to“致力于……”故devoted后加to。

第五處：us改為ourselves；考查反身代詞。此處指“提高我們自己”，主語與賓語相同，應(yīng)使用反身代詞。故us改為ourselves。

第六處：one改為ones；考查代詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)我們不在是幼稚的人。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)使用one的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故one改為ones。

第七處：去掉the；考查固定搭配。what’s more“另外，而且”為固定搭配。故去掉the。

第八處：got改為get；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。此處描述的是客觀事實(shí)，應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。故got改為get。

第九處：are改為is；考查主謂一致。句意：失敗乃成功之母。此處failure“失敗”為抽象名詞，作主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)使用單數(shù)形式。故are改為is。

第十處：serious改為seriously；考查副詞。此處修飾動(dòng)詞treat，應(yīng)使用副詞形式。故serious改為seriously。

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