Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25）
作為高三學(xué)生，你經(jīng)歷過多次考試，體驗(yàn)過成功，也遭遇過失敗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要概述中學(xué)生中普遍存在的對(duì)考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，說明你的觀點(diǎn)。

態(tài)度一	態(tài)度二	你的態(tài)度
當(dāng)考試結(jié)果不如人意時(shí)，情緒低落，喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力	當(dāng)考試失敗時(shí)，分析并找出失敗的原因，鼓勵(lì)自己，增強(qiáng)自信，避免再犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤。	失敗乃成功之母……

要求：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
As middle school students, we have all taken examinations of different types and  
         

Answer 1

As middle school students, we have all taken examinations of different types and experienced success as well as failure．Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．
Some of us become low in spirits in face of failure, while others are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies．As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．
Fortunately, some students take quite positive attitudes towards their setbacks．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won’t repeat the mistakes in their later examinations．
As far as I’m concerned, I believe that failure is the mother of success．So long as we can find out the cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．

首先審好題，英語作文關(guān)鍵在于讀懂題及利用好題目所提供的線索和細(xì)節(jié)，本篇要求學(xué)生能根據(jù)提示用120字簡(jiǎn)要概述中學(xué)生中普遍存在的對(duì)考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度及說說自己的看法。作為學(xué)生先要把開頭讀懂，應(yīng)以為:作為中學(xué)生我們所有人已經(jīng)考過不同類型的考試，要接著說在考試中經(jīng)歷過成功和失敗，成功和失敗本身是2種不同的體驗(yàn)，為了讓句子更協(xié)調(diào)，只能第一個(gè)詞用and 第二個(gè)用as well as，對(duì)于學(xué)生考試只能是exams，而不同的學(xué)生對(duì)于考試的態(tài)度不同，考后的結(jié)果也就不同，對(duì)于失敗的態(tài)度也就不同。Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．有了失敗，學(xué)生都有不同的反應(yīng)，接下來詳細(xì)描述就好了。結(jié)合提示，態(tài)度一當(dāng)考試結(jié)果不如人意時(shí)（failure，disappointed），情緒低落（become low in spirits），喪失信心（lose one’s heart），不再繼續(xù)努力(don’t want to make further efforts),這些反應(yīng)只代表了部分同學(xué)，所以只能用some,我們中的一些Some of us，連句子就變成Some of us become low in spirits in face of failue ，面對(duì)face,是對(duì)自己失望以至于不努力，while others are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies。不努力，隨著時(shí)間的流逝，由不好變得更糟。As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．結(jié)合提示態(tài)度二中，由于采取了積極的態(tài)度（take quite positive attitudes）分析并找出失敗的原因（analyz the cause of their failure），鼓勵(lì)自己（encourage themselves），增強(qiáng)自信（become more confident），避免再犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤（won’t repeat the mistakes in their later examinations）用過渡詞將2種態(tài)度分開Fortunately．效果就不一樣。至于我相信失敗是成功之母，要翻譯出來并加以說明。I believe that failure is the mother of success。原因是只要找準(zhǔn)失敗的原因加以改進(jìn)，學(xué)習(xí)就能有所提高我們才能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想。So long as we can find out the cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．只要So long as，找出find out，改變學(xué)習(xí)的方法improve our ways of learning，取得極大地進(jìn)步make great progress，把夢(mèng)想變?yōu)楝F(xiàn)實(shí)turn our dream into reality，最后就是把句子順序調(diào)整好，然后通讀全文，不妥當(dāng)?shù)牡胤皆偕约诱{(diào)整。