Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。 文中共有10處

語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

       刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

       修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

       1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My neighbor Li Hua is going to graduate college and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, says it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago, he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard in college.

Answer 1

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learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, says

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it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoking and so on. He felt it

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was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago, he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents

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were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard

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in college.