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4．假定你是李華，你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會(huì)．請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加，要點(diǎn)包括：
1．時(shí)間：周五晚8點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)2．地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂部
3．內(nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等4．要求：備小禮物意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．答案必須寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上．
Dear Susan，
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiao Ming's birthday．
      ．
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 假定你是李華，你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會(huì)．請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加，要點(diǎn)包括：1．時(shí)間：周五晚8點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)2．地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂部3．內(nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等4．要求：備小禮物意．寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．答案必須寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】We want to give him a surprise，so please keep quiet about it．句中使用并列句；When he comes，we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him．時(shí)間狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處；It'll be nice to see how excited he will be．句中運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞不定式作真正主語，并和how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句結(jié)合在一起；I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party，too．省略that的賓語從句在句中展現(xiàn)．
We want to give him a surprise，so please keep quiet about it．（高分句型一）
When he comes，we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him．（高分句型二）
It'll be nice to see how excited he will be．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Susan，
      We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday．We'd like to invite you to the party．We want to give him a surprise，so please keep quiet about it．（高分句型一）We'll gather at the Students'Club at 8 pm this Friday，after the evening classes．And it's going to last about an hour．We each will prepare a little present．When he comes，we'll light the candles and sing"Happy Birthday"together for him．（高分句型二）Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games．It'll be nice to see how excited he will be．（高分句型三）I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party，too．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．