分析 本篇作文要求考生向家長說明換智能手機的理由,即考生需要寫智能手機的好處.注意分點列舉.寫作時為了語言的連貫應(yīng)該恰當使用連接詞和插入語以及注意高級詞匯和句式的使用.
重要短語:
In the first place,首先,In addition而且,be addicited in,沉溺于
高分句子:
I really need a Mobile phone for it is necessary and important in modern society as it brings a lot of convenient to lives and provides a new way for me to contact with you and my friends.本句為長復(fù)合句,包含as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句.
解答 I really need a Mobile phone for it is necessary and important in modern society as it brings a lot of convenient to lives and provides a new way for me to contact with you and my friends.(高分句型)
In the first place,mobile phone makes my study more efficient.I can use mobile phones to search data,to delivery files and so on.For our students,we can use mobile phone to do some readings at any time and any places without carrying a book.
In addition,mobile phone makes our lives be more wonderful in that,it has been added more and more functions,such as watching movies,listening to music and writing blog,etc.(條理清晰說明原因)
In a word,mobile phone provides great convenient for our lives,and can make my live more wonderful and brings me an easier way to contact with the world.And I promise if I have it,I would not be addicited to it.So,can I have one?(提出要求)
點評 在寫作中,除了保證單詞的正確性和高級性,重要的就是要盡量運用多樣化的句式,注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合,使文章看起來有水平不單調(diào).
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