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8．我們的環(huán)境質(zhì)量已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)重要問(wèn)題，造成這個(gè)問(wèn)題的原因有很多，我們也采取了一些措施去解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，根據(jù)下列提示完成作文．
注意：1、短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)；
2、詞數(shù)150左右；
3、短文開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue．This problem results from various reasons．
The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded．We are running out of our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals．（高分句型一）If we continue to do this，life on earth cannot survive．Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection．Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air，forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution．Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems．People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems，to use modern methods of birth control，to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，I think we should take measures to control the increase of population，and every one of us should try his best to protect our environment．（高分句型三）If all of us can do our part，I am sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息我們的環(huán)境質(zhì)量已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)重要問(wèn)題，造成這個(gè)問(wèn)題的原因有很多，我們也采取了一些措施去解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題和應(yīng)對(duì)的措施兩個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)； 4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：result from由…導(dǎo)致；run out out用光，用盡； In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看；take measures to采取措施做某事；
We are running out of our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals．（高分句型一）
People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems，to use modern methods of birth control，to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products．（高分句型二）
    In my opinion，I think we should take measures to control the increase of population，and every one of us should try his best to protect our environment．（高分句型三）

解答 Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue．This problem results from various reasons．
      The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded．We are running out of our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals．（高分句型一）If we continue to do this，life on earth cannot survive．Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection．Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air，forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution．Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems．People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems，to use modern methods of birth control，to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products．（高分句型二）
      In my opinion，I think we should take measures to control the increase of population，and every one of us should try his best to protect our environment．（高分句型三）If all of us can do our part，I am sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．