Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右。

The event that stands out in Tom's memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.

“Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone shouted.

Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.

Jane, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊) through the smoke.

They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenly stopped. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed her.

Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, whom they called Makcik. Jane began banging on Makcik's door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighbors running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.

“She might have run for safety like everyone else!” Tom cried. However, Jane refused to give up. “I know Makcik's still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She hit against the door. “Go downstairs. Go now! Go!”

Paragraph 1:

Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.

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Paragraph 2:

Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot and held Jane's hand tightly. Both of them were coughing heavily. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible. Jane tried to protect her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She hit against the door again and again.

Paragraph 2:

Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately replaced the fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their strength. Sure enough, Makcik was inside the room, lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章主要記敘了Tom和姐姐Jane在家時(shí)，樓下摩托車店突然失火。他們沖出門，穿過濃煙，穿過走廊。Jane突然想起了住在他們隔壁的一位70多歲的老太太，想要告訴她讓她逃生。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：Tom注意到火焰正在上升。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述火燒上來后他們的反應(yīng)，Tom嚇呆了，像生了根似的站在原地，緊緊地抓住Jane的手，他們兩個(gè)都咳嗽得很厲害。Jane還是堅(jiān)持撞門。第二段開頭是：幸運(yùn)的是，一些路過的鄰居停下來提供幫助。本段應(yīng)該寫他們和鄰居一起救出了老太太的經(jīng)過。

最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。