Question

1．你校文學(xué)社向高三學(xué)生征文，請(qǐng)你以"How to Realize my Dream to University"為主題寫一篇短文．
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．理想的大學(xué)和專業(yè)；
2．目前的做法；
3．未來的打算．
注意：
1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100詞；
2．可根據(jù)情況增減細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)；
3．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
How to Realize my Dream to University
I often imagine whatuniversity I will be admitted to next year．To behonest，I do hope I can go to Beijing Universityto learn economics which I've dreamed of since I was a child．
As a matter of fact，I haven't completely put my heart into all subjectssuch as Maths，Physics．I oftenwant to play games and don't listen to my teachers carefully in class． As a saying goes，"No pains，no gains"．I do knowif I really want to realize my dream to the university，I have to work hard at all subjects．
From now on，I amdetermined to make full use of my time，attendingmy class attentively，reading wildly，completing all the homework and doing sports to keephealthy．
I believe，only by working hard at all subjects can I make mydream come true．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一篇征文．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：理想的大學(xué)和專業(yè)；目前的做法．寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱．重要短語(yǔ)：be admitted to…（被…錄�。�，to be honest （老實(shí)講），dream of （夢(mèng)想），as a matter of fact…（事實(shí)上…），put one's heart into（用心投入），realize one's dream（實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的夢(mèng)想），be determined to（下定決心做某事），make full use of （充分利用）．

解答 How to Realize my Dream to University
I often imagine whatuniversity I will be admitted to next year．To behonest，I do hope I can go to Beijing Universityto learn economics which I've dreamed of since I was a child．【高分句型】（理想的大學(xué)和專業(yè)）
As a matter of fact，I haven't completely put my heart into all subjectssuch as Maths，Physics．I oftenwant to play games and don't listen to my teachers carefully in class． As a saying goes，"No pains，no gains"．I do knowif I really want to realize my dream to the university，I have to work hard at all subjects．（目前的做法）
From now on，I am determined to make full use of my time，attending my class attentively，reading wildly，completingall the homework and doing sports to keep healthy．【高分句型】（未來的打算）
I believe，only by working hard at all subjects can I make mydream come true．（結(jié)尾---總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．