Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你的同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下寫出應(yīng)該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

  

Jennifer considers me like a friend to talk, laugh, and do things with her. She believes that I am a friend she can depend in time of need. I was watering the flowers in the garden this morning when she drops in, telling me that she needed my help because I was in low spirits. When asking what made her so unhappy, Jennifer told me her friend Tina was reading her diary the other days when she entered the classroom. She was too angry at the time that she shouted at her, which, of course, ended their friend. Having heard what she said, I said, "We shall never have friends unless we expect to find them without faults."

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Jennifer considers me like a friend to talk, laugh, and do things with her. She believes that I am a

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friend she can depend in time of need. I was watering the flowers in the garden this morning

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 when she drops in, telling me that she needed my help because I was in low spirits. When

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 asking what made her so unhappy, Jennifer told me her friend Tina was reading her diary the

 asked

 other days when she entered the classroom. She was too angry at the time that she shouted at

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her, which, of course, ended their friend. Having heard what she said, I said, "We shall never

                           friendship

 have friends unless we expect to find them without faults."

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