【題目】假設(shè)你是李華,你從朋友Mike處借的一本書不慎遺失,F(xiàn)在,請(qǐng)用英文給他寫道歉信,請(qǐng)求原諒。

注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右;

2.信的開頭與結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mike,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you. Now I’m expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.

Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday. But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt!

This morning, I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive. However, I promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me again and accept my sincere apology.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇作文是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊,以條目的形式列出以進(jìn)行寫作。

提綱作文寫作要領(lǐng):

第一步:審題:審題是關(guān)鍵所在,在整個(gè)寫作過程中起著決定性作用。

(1)審要求:弄清“情景”和“要求”兩部分構(gòu)成!扒榫啊敝邪ㄋ鶎懖牧系哪康摹(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等,一般在書面表達(dá)題的前半部分而“要求”一般在書面表達(dá)的后半部分,以“注意”形式給出,實(shí)際上是對(duì)考生提出的要求。因而考生對(duì)于題目所提供的說明,應(yīng)認(rèn)真分析、反復(fù)推敲,搞清提出的內(nèi)容要求,抓住所要表達(dá)的信息點(diǎn)。

如本篇作文的情景就是:假設(shè)你是李華,你遺失了你的英國(guó)籍好友 Frank 借給你的一本書。要求就是:請(qǐng)用英文給他寫道歉信,請(qǐng)求原諒。

(2)審文體一般有三大類:記敘文、說明文和應(yīng)用文。文體不同,格式不同。

(3)審人稱。即搞清楚此篇文章是“由誰(shuí)寫給誰(shuí)”的。而讀者對(duì)象有時(shí)沒有明示,要考生自己去進(jìn)行判斷。

比如“假設(shè)你是李華”,寫作時(shí)即用第一人稱“我”,即李華。

4)審時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)情景判斷短文需要的主體時(shí)態(tài),即搞清楚要寫的是什么時(shí)候的事,過去的就用過去時(shí)。比如日記,是敘述過去發(fā)生的事情,自然用過去時(shí);通知多用將來時(shí)。

第二步:抓中心,列要點(diǎn),寫提綱。作文一定要切題,要抓住中心,緊扣要點(diǎn)。

第三步:選詞組句,連句成篇在這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中盡量使用多種句型,多種句式,選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇作文使用了定語(yǔ)從句:I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you。時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句:I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday

并列句:I went to buy the same book in some bookstores but it was very expensive。感嘆句:How angry and guilty I felt!并運(yùn)用了to my sorrow,tighten my belt等高級(jí)詞匯。

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