Question

你校校門口在放學(xué)時間經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)交通擁堵，給師生和路人帶來很多不便。你校英文報就此向?qū)W生征集解決擁堵的良策。假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，請按下列提示用英語寫一封信，向校報投稿。

1. 寫信的目的。

2. 分析學(xué)校門口擁堵的原因。

3. 提出2-3點建議。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右。

Dear Editor,

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I am Li Hua, a senior high school student from Grade 3. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our

school gate.

With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, which

has caused a lot of inconvenience to us.

In order to avoid traffic jams, I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken. First, we should

encourage students to ride a bicycle or walk to school instead of taking a car, which not only avoids traffic jams, but also builds up students' health. It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others, which will surely make the street less crowded. Besides, cars should not be allowed to park in front of the school gate.

I do hope my suggestions will be considered and the problem can disappear soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求寫一篇短文，就校門口交通擁堵的現(xiàn)象提出自己的建議。信的要點包括：寫信的目的；分析擁堵原因；提出建議。寫作時注意作文的連貫性；作文詞數(shù)在120詞左右，不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點錯誤；注意寫信的格式。

亮點說明：

范文使用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)With so many parents coming to pick up their children；定語從句which has caused a lot of inconvenience to us，which not only avoids traffic jams，which will surely make the street less crowded，含虛擬語氣的賓語從句I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken.等語法知識，使作文的說理性更強，更有說服力；

范文注意使用with, In order to等來銜接前后句，用First, Besides進(jìn)行列舉，使作文層次分明、條理清晰；

范文使用了較多的重點詞匯：traffic jam，frequent，avoid，bicycle，suggestion，consider，disappear等，使作文的內(nèi)容得到了充實；

范文還使用了較多短語和固定搭配in order to，encourage students to...，instead of，not only ...but also，builds up，allow junior students to...，in front of等，使作文句式多樣，語意連貫。

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