Question

你和班上的同學在周日去敬老院幫助照顧老人。請你根據(jù)以下信息，寫一篇英文日記。
寫作內(nèi)容：

活動 安排	內(nèi)容	1. 時間：2010年12月1日 星期日8:30啟程，共進午餐后返回
		2. 地點：校門口集中，一個半小時自行車車程 目的地：敬老院（the Nursing Home）
		3. 活動：親切交談、為老人表演節(jié)目、贈送禮物、拍照留念
	感受	……

寫作要求：詞數(shù)80-120個。 注意：日記的開頭已寫好。
December 1^st Sunday 2010
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Answer 1

Today we went to the Nursing Home to help take care of the old people .
At 8:30 am, we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half. Soon after we got to the Nursing Home, where many old people are staying, we began to chat with them to see how their life is going, and then we sang songs and danced for them. We also presented our gifts, took lots of photos and had lunch together before we came back.
I feel very great to see the old people living so happily in the Nursing Home where they are taken good care of.

解析這是一篇日記，時態(tài)為過去時。文章的要點已經(jīng)給出，同學在寫作時不要遺漏。在寫個人感受時可以適當發(fā)揮，多運用好的詞匯如present等等。同時注意也要用一些好的連接詞讓文章更流暢一點。