Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李明，你打算和幾位朋友在暑假進(jìn)行一次旅行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給信息，給住在另一座城市的外籍朋友戴維發(fā)一封電子郵件介紹這次旅行計(jì)劃，并邀請(qǐng)他一起旅行。

主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.地點(diǎn)：海南島Hainan Island; 時(shí)間：7月15日-21日

2.活動(dòng)包括遠(yuǎn)足(hike)、爬山、游泳、篝火晚會(huì)(campfire party)和潛水(diving)

3.注意事項(xiàng)：請(qǐng)帶好游泳衣(bathing suit)和護(hù)照(passport)

注意： 詞數(shù)100左右,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

Dear David,

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Yours

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

How is everything going? My friends and I have decided to go on an adventure trip to Hainan Island during the summer holiday. I am writing to tell you about our travel plan.

We will be traveling around Hainan Island from July 15 to 21. While there we will go hiking, climb the mountains, swim near the beach and have a campfire party. We also plan to go diving if weather permits. I’d like you to join us if possible. I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together.

Please remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】本篇作文是開放性作文。開放性作文要求學(xué)生根據(jù)提供的情景，在短時(shí)間內(nèi)寫一段文字。開放性作文更能反映出考生的綜合素質(zhì)和真實(shí)的寫作水平，更有利于開展中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)素質(zhì)教育，更符高考改革趨勢(shì)。

亮點(diǎn)：本文要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)言地道。在句式方面，使用了多種復(fù)合句。比如賓語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，祈使句等。同時(shí)使用多種時(shí)態(tài)。比如用將來(lái)進(jìn)行時(shí)，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)等，使文章生動(dòng)豐富。

賓語(yǔ)從句：I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together.

祈使句： Please remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport.

狀語(yǔ)從句：While there we will go hiking, climb the mountains, swim near the beach and have a campfire party.

We also plan to go diving if weather permits.

I’d like you to join us if possible.

將來(lái)完成進(jìn)行時(shí)：We will be traveling around Hainan Island from July 15 to 21.

固定句式：How is everything going?