Question

A mother said, “My son is always playing computer games, chatting with his friends on the net. He never has time to talk to me.”請(qǐng)從高中生的角度談?wù)勥@一現(xiàn)象，并發(fā)表你的看法。

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詞數(shù)：120左右；

可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

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With the development of science and technology, more and more students are addicted to computers.

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Answer 1

Possible version：

With the development of science and technology, more and more students are addicted to computers.

Many students like computer so much that they seem to develop a good relationship with the computer. When they feel depressed, instead of communicating with parents, teachers and friends around them, they tend to express their feelings and thoughts on QQs, blogs, and so on. They are seldom seen chatting with others. Thus, the relationship between people is becoming colder,

As a student, personally, I hold the view that they spend too much time online and it does harm to their activities in reality. They will be in danger of losing communication skills in real life. It is high time that we paid more attention to this phenomenon and took some measures to make a great change.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是開(kāi)放作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的�？忌�在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是對(duì)學(xué)生日常生活中存在的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要求發(fā)表自己的看法，因此本文必須用第一人稱we。再有就是應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如feel depressed，does harm to, in danger of，paid more attention to等，還運(yùn)用了It is high time that句型，so that的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句還有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞to make短語(yǔ)，to develop短語(yǔ)等等。

考點(diǎn)：開(kāi)放作文