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【題目】閱讀下面，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。(滿分25分)

Christine closed the door to Anna’s room. Inside, her classmate and friend had fallen asleep.

Downstairs, Christine’s mom, Donna, was grasping Anna’s mother Sheila around the shoulders.

“We should go,” she said. “Get some rest, huh?” Sheila nodded, blew her nose, and then waved them goodbye.

On the car ride home, Christine worked up the courage to ask the question on her mind. “Mom? Why was Sheila weeping?” She thought she knew the answer, of course: Anna’s cancer. In the past, Anna had been the neighborhood do-gooder, always going door to door for various causes: the local animal shelter, suffering children in Africa, or the families who’d lost their homes to fire. Now Anna could barely feed or dress herself. Christine thought it so unfair when bad things like this happened to good people.

“Well, it’s complex, but I guess you’re old enough to understand.”

“Understand what?”

“Understand that Anna is sick, yes, but Anna actually gets a lot of help. The government helps pay for a lot of her medicine. She gets meals delivered to her by a nonprofit. She even gets massages from local volunteers.”

“Wow!”

“Her life’s still very hard, of course, and no one would trade places with her, but when you have cancer, everyone can see that you need help, “continued Donna.” They don’t always see that the people around you are suffering.”

“People like Sheila?”

“Yes, did you know that Sheila took a break from her job to stay home with Anna?”

“No!” Christine was surprised. She had never thought about who took Anna to her appointments, or fed her when she was too weak to lift a spoon. Of course it was her family.

“Yes. So that means that many of the things they used to do with that extra money are all out the window now. They’re even worried now about keeping the house.”

“Their house? So Anna might have to move, while she’s sick?”

“If she doesn’t get better soon, and the bills keep piling up...” Donna pulled into the driveway, and just in time. Her cheeks were shining with tears.

注意:

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 至少使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，使用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1.

“There has to be something done for them,” Christine said firmly to their classmates and friends.

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Paragraph 2.

But the best part of the party was when Anna came through the door with her family, attracted with promises of a chocolate cake and live music.

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Answer 1

【答案】“There has to be something done for them,” Christine said firmly to their classmates and friends. She described Anna’s situation and the scene of Sheila weeping. Everyone was deeply touched as they knew what a selfless person Anna is. Christine suggested having a yard sale to raise money for her family. They would surprise them with money at a party with a chocolate cake and live music. Everyone gathered their old belongings to sell. After a day of hard work, they made 1,000 dollars and rushed to Christine’s house to set up the party. Everyone enjoyed delicious foods and wonderful music.

But the best part of the party was when Anna came through the door with her family, attracted with promises of a chocolate cake and live music. Everyone yelled, “Surprise!” and Anna’s face lit up. Christine took the microphone from the band and said, “Anna, we know you are going through a hard time, so we raised 1,000 dollars to repay you for your good deeds and help pay your bills. Know that we will always be with you.” Tears of joy fell down Anna’s cheeks as we hugged her.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，在克里斯汀和媽媽的聊天中，克里斯汀知道了安娜患了癌癥。安娜曾經(jīng)在健康的時(shí)候給予了別人非常多的幫助�，F(xiàn)在她患病之后，生活步履維艱。為了看病她家里債臺(tái)高筑。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：克里斯汀告訴她的家人和朋友，她要為安娜做些什么。所以應(yīng)該寫克里斯汀為安娜募捐的全部過程。更要詳細(xì)的描述為什么要給安娜募捐，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容和形式以及募捐的結(jié)果等。第二段開頭是：但派對最精彩的部分是，安娜和她的家人一起走進(jìn)門來，被一塊巧克力蛋糕和現(xiàn)場音樂所吸引。所以本段應(yīng)該是寫在安娜家里舉辦派對的過程和對安娜的鼓勵(lì)。文章的最后應(yīng)該是安娜在收到我們的募捐款之后的感受。

續(xù)寫時(shí)要求使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。