Question

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.Like everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy take pictures since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly．Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was  good. I was so tiring that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow．

Answer 1

【小題1】like→as
【小題2】加a
【小題3】加when
【小題4】them→us
【小題5】visiting→visit
【小題6】take→taking
【小題7】passes→passed
【小題8】and →but
【小題9】tiring→tired
【小題10】去掉at

解析試題分析：
【小題1】Like everyone knows, l因?yàn)閘ike是介詞后面要接名詞代詞，而后面是句子的要用as。
【小題2】it's ∧famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals在文中首次提到那是一座著名的峨眉山，表示泛指。
【小題3】It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. 因?yàn)閕t是時(shí)間，后面用when引導(dǎo)從句。
【小題4】The three of them were very excited. 文中提到我和父母親強(qiáng)調(diào)我們?nèi)齻�(gè)人，并非指他們，故把them改為us.
【小題5】we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.在這個(gè)句子中，visit這一動(dòng)作和fed以及told并列。
【小題6】On the way up I was busy take pictures busy后面要用動(dòng)詞ing形式，故把take改為taking.
【小題7】The time passes quickly．時(shí)間過(guò)得很快，指的是當(dāng)時(shí)過(guò)得快，故把passes改為passed.
【小題8】The food was expensive and the service was  good. 時(shí)間過(guò)得很快，指的是當(dāng)時(shí)過(guò)得快，故把passes改為passed.
【小題9】I was so tiring that指人感到累用形容詞的ed形式，某物令人….用tiring.
【小題10】去掉at the moment 后面接句子故把介詞去掉�！耙弧�就…”