Question

7．假如你是李華，最近你在瀏覽一個(gè)澳大利亞中學(xué)網(wǎng)站時(shí)，看到一位名叫Jack的中學(xué)生的留言，他計(jì)劃在暑假期間到中國(guó)桂林旅游，希望能有一名中國(guó)高中生做他的導(dǎo)游．你對(duì)此很感興趣，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一封e-mail給他，介紹相關(guān)情況．
    主要內(nèi)容包括：
    1希望義務(wù)做他的導(dǎo)游；
    2．簡(jiǎn)略介紹桂林；
    3．打算如何給他做導(dǎo)游；
    4．期盼他的回復(fù)．
    注意：
    1詞數(shù)100左右；
    2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
    3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，…
                                                                               
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封電子郵件．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要寫(xiě)清要點(diǎn)，包括：表達(dá)意愿，自我介紹，具體做法，期待回復(fù)．其次，要以第一人稱來(lái)表述．最后要注意時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
intend to do sth 打算做某事
scenic spots 景點(diǎn)
stunning beauty 美景
look forward to 期盼
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，I saw the message you posted on it．
句中while連接時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，從句中省略了相同的主語(yǔ)和系動(dòng)詞．
I will go to Yangshuo with you by boat，enjoying the stunning beauty on either bank of the Lijiang River．
句中現(xiàn)在分詞enjoying作伴隨狀語(yǔ)．
I feel it a great honor to be your guide．
句中it作形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式．

解答 Dear Jack，
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，I saw the message you posted on it．（高分句型一）I am pleased to know that you intend to travel in Guilin during the summer vacation with a Chinese student as your guide．（表達(dá)意愿）
I am a native of Guilin and know the city very well．Therefore，I volunteer to be your tour guide．Guilin is a famous international tourist city．It is well-known for its beautiful scenery．On the one hand，I will keep you company visiting the beautiful scenic spots．I will go to Yangshuo with you by boat，enjoying the stunning beauty on either bank of the Lijiang River．（高分句型二）On the other hand，I will tell you the long and rich history of Guilin．（介紹桂林和自己的打算）
Of course，you will taste a lot of special local food，such as rice noodles．
Look forward to your reply．I feel it a great honor to be your guide．（高分句型三）（期待回復(fù)）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫(xiě)對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．