Question

14．請(qǐng)你仔細(xì)觀察右側(cè)圖片，寫一篇120字的短文．你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：
1．簡單敘述圖片中的內(nèi)容；
2．談?wù)劯改笇?duì)你的期待；
3．你的看法和對(duì)將來的打算．
注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）
（請(qǐng)?jiān)谶吙騼?nèi)規(guī)范答題，超出邊框外的答案無效．）
As is shown in the picture above，      ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Qualitied education ①is the first wise choice，which②later makes a promising future．
素質(zhì)教育是首要的明智選擇，以后它會(huì)制造出一個(gè)充滿希望的未來．
①qualitied education 意為：素質(zhì)教育．
②本句為非限定性的定語從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代先行詞 choice，在該從句中作主語．
句型二：
To live up to my parents'dreams①，I will make every effort to②be a wise learner and a brave discoverer in the future．
為了實(shí)現(xiàn)父母的夢想，未來，我將盡一切努力成為一個(gè)聰明的學(xué)習(xí)者和一個(gè)勇敢的發(fā)現(xiàn)者．
①To live up to my parents'dreams為動(dòng)詞不定式短語作目的狀語，表示將要完成的動(dòng)作．
②make every effort to意為：盡一切努力做（某事）．

解答 As is shown in the picture above，different parents have different expectations of children．Some parents are rich but they don't have much education．So they hope that their children can go to college to be well-educated．For some，things are just the opposite．They want their children to make money．（首先簡述圖片的內(nèi)容）
    My parents，though they are poor，don't wish me to make money at an early time．They say school education is vital for a poor family．Qualitied education is the first wise choice，which later makes a promising future．【高分句型一】（結(jié)合自己，介紹了父母的期待）
    I'm completely for what my parents expect of me．I believe wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand．（表達(dá)自己的看法）To live up to my parents'dreams，I will make every effort to be a wise learner and a brave discoverer in the future．【高分句型二】（介紹自己將來的打算）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題提供的是圖畫，主要考查考生的觀察力、思考力以及表達(dá)能力；因此要求考生應(yīng)結(jié)合題目的要求，看懂了意思之后再進(jìn)行寫作；具體做法是：首先，根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容整理出幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)決定要采用的語言形式，包括確定文中的人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以及選用相應(yīng)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，并且還要寫出自己的看法或感受．