Question

10．假定你是李華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo)中心（Learning Center）的幫助．根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你須書面預(yù)約，請按下列要點寫一封信：
（1）本人簡介；
（2）求助內(nèi)容；
（3）約定時間；
（4）你的聯(lián)系方式（Email：lihua@126．com；Phone：12345678）
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）結(jié)束語以為你寫好
Dear  Sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and find many courses interesting．But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．
I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．You may email or phone me．Here are my email address and phone number：lihua@126．com，call 12345678． 
Look forward to your reply．
Yours，
 Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點寫一封信．寫作要點：（1）本人簡介；（2）求助內(nèi)容；（3）約定時間；（4）你的聯(lián)系方式，屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．重要短語：take summer courses（上暑期課…），ask for help （需求幫助），have some difficulties with （做某事有困難），provides sth for sb （為…提供），be anxious to do （渴望做…），look forward to doing （期望做…）．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
 I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university．【高分句型】（本人簡介） I'm writing to ask for help．I came here last month and find many courses interesting．【高分句型】But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library．I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you．（求助內(nèi)容）I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is OK with you．You may email or phone me．（約定時間） Here are my email address and phone number：lihua@126．com，call 12345678．（你的聯(lián)系方式 ）
       Look forward to your reply．
  Yours，
  Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．