Question

請以Chances always favor those who are prepared為題，結(jié)合生活中的事例，用英語寫一篇短文，要求如下：①除詩歌外，文體不限；

②文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

③詞數(shù)不少于120，注意：文章的標題已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。

Chances always favor those who are prepared

 

Answer 1

The door of opportunity won’t open unless you do some pushing. Chances always favor prepared minds. The story happened when I was in high school can help illuminate the true meaning of the proverb.

On hearing the news that one student would be chosen and appointed to be the tour guide of some visiting teachers from Ireland, all of us felt excited. However, what annoyed us was that few of us could speak English fluently because most of us attached little significance to oral English. But our monitor, who practiced her listening and speaking nearly every day, was no exception. She succeeded in grasping the opportunity. Even more excitedly, she was offered a free summer camp to Ireland later.

Contrary to common belief that she was simply luckier, I think it was her preparations in advance that led to her succe ss. This is a lesson I can take from her success.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些固定短語be appointed to 被任命為；attach significance to 認為。。重要；succeed in doing成功做成某事；Contrary to與。。相反；in advance提前；On hearing the news that one student would be chosen and appointed to be the tour guide of some visiting teachers from Ireland, all of us felt excited.在這個句子中on doing表示一。。就，the news后面跟著一個同位語從句，用來解釋說明news的內(nèi)容；However, what annoyed us was that few of us could speak English fluently because most of us attached little significance to oral English這個句子中運用到what引導主語從句；Contrary to common belief that she was simply luckier, I think it was her preparations in advance that led to her succe ss.這個句子運用到賓語從句，強調(diào)句。

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