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"你幸福嗎？"這是一個(gè)很現(xiàn)實(shí)而值得深思的問(wèn)題．最近，我們了解了當(dāng)前部分中學(xué)生 的幸福感：
1）大多數(shù)同學(xué)覺(jué)得自己幸福，因?yàn)閾碛薪】蹬c和諧的家庭；
2）部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為能夠與周?chē)�的人融洽相處就是一種幸福；
3）還有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)成就感直接影響幸福感；
4）你感到幸福嗎？你的理由．
參考詞匯：和諧的harmonious
[寫(xiě)作要求]
必須用五個(gè)句子表達(dá)所有的內(nèi)容，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)I
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)流暢、連貫．
Are you happy？This is a very realistic and deep question．Recently，we've learned about the sense of happiness among some middle school students．（提出觀點(diǎn)） A majority of students think that they hold happiness for their owning health and a harmonious family．（高分句型一）However，some believe that，in their dictionary of happiness，being happy means being able to getting along well with people around them．As learning is a top task over anything for students，others think that the sense of study achievementwill largely affect the happiness level of them，while the frustration in their exams might account for the loss of happiness．（高分句型二）（闡述理由）
As for me，I feel definitely fulfilled and happy because I get the precious chance to study passionately for my future，enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 A majority of students think that they hold happiness for their owning health and a harmonious family．
高分句型二：
As learning is a top task over anything for students，others think that the sense of study achievement  will largely affect the happiness level of them，while the frustration in their exams might account for the loss of happiness．
句型一 A majority of students think that they hold happiness for…該句中有一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，that在句中只作引導(dǎo)詞，不作句子成分
句型二 ①As learning is a top task over anything for students 該句是一個(gè)由as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句
          ②while the frustration in their exams might account for…詞句中while是一個(gè)并列連詞，聯(lián)系前后句，既表轉(zhuǎn)折又表對(duì)比
此外，該文章還有以下重要短語(yǔ)和固定用法：a majority of 許多 account for 解釋

解答 Are you happy？This is a very relistic and deep question．Recently，we've learned about the sense of happiness among some middle school students．（提出觀點(diǎn)） A majority of students think that they hold happiness for their owning health and a harmonious family．（高分句型一）However，some believe that，in their dictionary of happiness，being happy means being able to getting along well with people around them．As learning is a top task over anything for students，others think that the sense of study achievement  will largely affect the happiness level of them，while the frustration in their exams might account for the loss of happiness．（高分句型二）（闡述理由）
   As for me，I feel definitely fulfilled and happy because I get the precious chance to study passionately for my future，enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書(shū)面表達(dá)為提綱類(lèi)，給類(lèi)作文規(guī)定了考生的寫(xiě)作思路．考生應(yīng)平時(shí)積累相應(yīng)的單詞和短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)言，簡(jiǎn)潔明了的將作文闡述清楚．