Question

【題目】英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同桌相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下作文為你同桌所寫(xiě)，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。 錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào) （^），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出改加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A big storm destroyed two villages in South Africa on last Friday, causing 4 death. Over 200 people became homeless as a result of the storm. A farmer said the storm began early in the morning and last one hour. He said, “I was in the kitchen with my wife and children while we heard a loud noise. A few minutes late, our house fell down. I managed to climb out, but much to my shocking, one of my boys were missing. I quickly went back inside and found them safe but frightened.” Soldiers came to rescue those burying under the ruins, and the government provided food, clothes, and shelters for homeless.

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【答案】

【解析】第一處，去掉on，last Friday前不需要加介詞。

第二處，death改為deaths�？疾槊�詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。4人死亡，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。

第三處，last改為lasted�？疾椴⒘兄^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)一致，前文began為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，此處and之后的last也應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，lasted。

第四處，while改為when。在引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，while之后只能跟延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞，而hear一詞是短暫性動(dòng)詞，故用when替代。

第五處，late改為later。later用在一段時(shí)間之后表示“…之后”，a few minutes later 幾分鐘之后。而late意為“遲的，晚的”。

第六處，shocking改為shock。屬詞類用錯(cuò)，此處應(yīng)用名詞形式。shock 名詞，震驚。much to my shock使我非常震驚的是…

第七處，were改為was。考查主謂一致。one of my boys主語(yǔ)是one，為單數(shù)，因此謂語(yǔ)用was。

第八處，them改為him。代詞用錯(cuò)。根據(jù)前文one of my boys，此處應(yīng)為單數(shù)，代詞賓格用him。

第九處，burying改為buried。those buried under the ruins指那些被埋在廢墟里的人。

第十處，for后加the。the homeless指的是那些無(wú)家可歸的人。