假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處, 每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）, 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn), 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear guests,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are luck to have you here in middle of our English Week Activities.

As planning, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program was to develop our interest in English learning and practically abilities in listening and speaking. The program consists in the following activity: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, we are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will be benefit from your presence but I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.

1.luck改為lucky

2.加the

3.planning改為planned

4.was改為is

5.practically改為practical

6.in改為of

7.activity改為activities

8.we改為you

9.去掉be

10.but改為and

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇?dú)g迎詞。歡迎客人訪(fǎng)問(wèn)我校并出席我校英語(yǔ)周的活動(dòng)。文章表明了三層意思1.表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；3.表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿。

1.luck改為lucky，考查形容詞作表語(yǔ)。be動(dòng)詞后用形容詞作表語(yǔ)，luck是名詞，故luck改為lucky。

2.加the，考查詞組。in the middle of在......中間，在......過(guò)程中。句意：我們很榮幸能邀請(qǐng)您們參加到我校英語(yǔ)周的活動(dòng)中。故加the。

3.planning改為planned，考查分詞和省略結(jié)構(gòu)。本句完整結(jié)構(gòu)為as it is planned 正如計(jì)劃的那樣。事情和計(jì)劃之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，因此要用過(guò)去分詞，且當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)從句中有it is 時(shí)，可以省略。故planning改為planned。

4.was改為is，考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文通篇用的是現(xiàn)在時(shí)，因此為保持文章時(shí)態(tài)一致，要將過(guò)去時(shí)改為現(xiàn)在時(shí)。故was改為is。

5.practically改為practical，考查形容詞修飾名詞。abilities是名詞，因此要用形容詞修飾，practical abilities實(shí)踐能力。故practically改為practical。

6.in改為of，考查詞組。consist in在于......之意，consist of包含，由......組成。前者說(shuō)明一樣事物的性質(zhì)，這種性質(zhì)大都是抽象的、非物質(zhì)的；后者則說(shuō)明組成某一事物的部分，這些部分大都是具體的、物質(zhì)的。故in改為of。

7.activity改為activities，考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。根據(jù)下文推斷，English Talent Show這個(gè)英語(yǔ)才能展示表演包含許多活動(dòng)，因此要將名詞的單數(shù)形式改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。故activity改為activities。

8.we改為you，考查句意理解。you are welcome to do sth歡迎你（們）來(lái)......，本句表示歡迎你們來(lái)參加這些活動(dòng)。故we改為you。

9.

10.

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