假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫得以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加： 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（ ∧ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

The environment pollution is more and more seriously today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been greatly affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of disease caused by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.

Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bags. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.

 

1.seriously---serious

2.drink it ----把it 去掉

3.when trees---后加are

4.There was ---there is

5.affecting---affected

6.disease----diseases

7.the----a

8.what----which

9.so long as---as long as

10.top people cut----stop people cutting

【解析】

試題分析：如今環(huán)境污染日益嚴(yán)重。不僅人們沒有干凈可飲用的水，而且由于樹木遭到砍伐，一些動(dòng)物也滅絕了。人們的健康受到了空氣，噪音和水污染的嚴(yán)重影響。為了過(guò)上更美好的生活，作者呼吁到了人們?cè)撝卫砦廴�，保護(hù)環(huán)境的時(shí)候了。

1.。The environment pollution is more and more seriously today.。系動(dòng)詞is后應(yīng)該跟形容詞做表語(yǔ)，所以把seriously改為serious。

2.。We have no clean water to drink it。此處是不定式做定語(yǔ)，不定式的動(dòng)詞和被修飾的名詞之間是邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，故去掉it。

3.。And when trees cut down。此句中tree和謂語(yǔ)cut down之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)形式，在cut前加are。

4.。There was more and more dirty smoke in the air.。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知此處是說(shuō)現(xiàn)在的情況，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，把was改為is。

5.。People’s health has been greatly affecting by air,。根據(jù)句意可知此處是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)形式 ，把a(bǔ)ffecting 改為affected。

6.。Many people have died of disease caused by pollution.。disease是可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，把disease改為diseases。

7.。In order to live the better life,。 固定短語(yǔ)：live a….. life“過(guò)著……的生活”，所以把the改為a。

8.。what saves money and reduces pollution.。此處是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，what不引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，改為which。

9.so -- as。Use things so long as possible. 固定短語(yǔ)：as …..as possible“盡可能”，把so改為as。

10. cut---- cutting。we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down.固定短語(yǔ)：stop sb from doing sth“阻止某人做某事”，所以把cut改為cutting。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。

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