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假定你是李華，在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上， 你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-9-2013  21:18                             1#
newable ☆	Hi, everyone, I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do? TOP
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寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．告訴Grown-up心理壓力不可避免；
2．告訴Grown-up心里壓力的危害；
3．建議Grown-up應(yīng)正確面對(duì)心理壓力；
4．介紹你面對(duì)心里壓力時(shí)所采取的措施。（至少寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)措施）
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右。   2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3．文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hi, Grown-up,
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.
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Hope my ideas will work.

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Hi, Grown-up,
It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life, so don’t worry. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.
Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it by myself, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.
To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively.
Hope my ideas will work.

試題分析：考察提綱類(lèi)作文。本文的話(huà)題是如何正確面對(duì)心理壓力，告訴對(duì)方心理壓力是很正常的現(xiàn)象。對(duì)人的身心健康也有很大的影響，一定要引起重視，而且要積極地面對(duì)它。在采取措施方面要注意勞逸結(jié)合，多和家人朋友交流，緩解各種不適情況。寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要使用平時(shí)積累的層次關(guān)系的短語(yǔ)，多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫(xiě)的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：在范文中運(yùn)用了較多的連接詞，如To sum up等；也有高級(jí)的句式：whenever I meet pressure。這個(gè)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。高級(jí)詞匯如overcome, do harm to…等等。考生在以后的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中也要注意文章的潤(rùn)色。