Question

由于觀點和立場的不同,孩子與父母之間時常存在一些矛盾和問題,某英文報社正在就“如何改善孩子與父母之間的關(guān)系”這一主題征稿,請你寫一篇英語短文,發(fā)表自己的觀點和看法。 

要點如下:

1. 存在問題:

孩子:不信任父母,不愿意與父母交流；經(jīng)常對父母發(fā)脾氣……

父母:處理問題的方式簡單,把自己的想法強加(impose . . . . . . on)給孩子……

2. 解決辦法:

孩子:多和父母溝通；尊敬父母,多體諒父母……

父母:多和孩子相處,耐心聽取他們的想法…… 

注意:可適當增加細節(jié)；詞數(shù):120左右

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

A good parent-child relationship is expected, but there are often problems.

As for children, they don’t trust their parents and are unwilling to communicate with them. Some children lose their temper easily because of the study burden, while some parents tend to neglect their children’s ideas and try to impose their own ideas on them.

    How can these problems be solved? In my opinion, children should be considerate and respect their parents. When they disagree with their parents, they should tell them. On the other hand, parents should learn to listen to their children’s ideas instead of deciding everything for them. In this way, a good parent-child relationship can be established.

【解析】本文的主題的如何改善孩子與父母之間的關(guān)系，與考生的生活實際非常貼切，有很強的可寫性，正因為是熟悉的事情，所以考生有話可說。本文的要點基本上都已經(jīng)給出，只需要按照適當?shù)捻樞蚪M織成英文即可。在寫作的時候注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯，讓文章更流暢，同時也要使用2-3個高級的句型如強調(diào)句，倒裝句讓文章更有檔次。