請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,并結(jié)合具體事例,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。

People nowadays are facing more and more pressures in life and therefore they are more likely to do something they like in their spare time. They hold the belief that a hobby is a good way to relax themselves and live a colorful life.

注意:1、無(wú)需寫標(biāo)題;

2、除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限;

3、內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例;

4、文中不能透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

5、字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120詞,如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Hobbies are of great importance to those who deal with a lot of pressures at work and in life, since they help them relax and feel free from pressures.

Fishing is my favorite hobby and it enables me to get over depression. At the end of September, the first monthly exam was held. Unfortunately, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, both of which used to be my strong subjects. As a result, my total test score fell dramatically and ranked 400th in our grade. I felt upset afterwards and my mother suggested I should spend some time on my hobby--- fishing for relaxation on a weekend. Packing up my fishing equipment, I was driven to a fishing pond by my father. There I fished for a whole day and calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successfully pushed me out of low spirits.

It's important for everyone to have a hobby, which can function as a way of fighting off pressure and regaining confidence.

【解析】這是一篇自由發(fā)揮寫作,題目為現(xiàn)代生活中人們有許多壓力,在業(yè)余時(shí)間他們更愿意做一些他們喜歡的事情,他們認(rèn)為興趣是放松的好方式。可知本寫作主要圍繞興趣,任何題材皆可。

范文主要講述我的興趣:釣魚。本文為經(jīng)典的三段式寫作,第一段Hobbies are of great importance to those who deal with a lot of pressures at work and in life, since they help them relax and feel free from pressures.就使用了who領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,since領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句;第二段第三句I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, both of which used to be my strong subjects.使用了which領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句;第五句I felt upset afterwards and my mother suggested I should spend some time on my hobby使用了suggest領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句;第六句Packing up my fishing equipment, I was driven to a fishing pond by my father.使用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略;最后一句It's important for everyone to have a hobby, which can function as a way of fighting off pressure and regaining confidence.使用了一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,收束全文。在短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用上,使用了諸如deal with應(yīng)對(duì)…,used to過(guò)去經(jīng)!..,As a result結(jié)果….,as a way of作為…的方式,短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用十分靈活;在詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用上也十分精彩,如使用了Unfortunately一個(gè)副詞單獨(dú)成句,詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用十分好。整篇文章亮點(diǎn)很多,從句運(yùn)用十分靈活,短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用精彩,詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用十分嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?偨Y(jié):自由發(fā)揮寫作時(shí)應(yīng)選擇最為簡(jiǎn)單的題材如記敘文,議論文等文體來(lái)寫

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